Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:woohoo:
 


One rainy day, in the middle of a street.
Sat a young teenage girl, with chuck-clad feet.

She wore several different shirts and purple skinny jeans.
She sat with her head down and her hands on her knees.

Her name was Draven, and at school she was teased.
But not in her own little world where she could do as she pleased.

The sky could be green, and the grass could be blue.
The clouds could be purple and a bunny could too.

Trees could have polka-dots and dirt could have stripes.
So long as no one caused her pain or strife.

The roads always empty, and the buildings abandoned.
She had every park, every swing, every sandbox to play with.

As she leaves, the colors will drain.
Pooling and puddling in the streets again.

The walls, the grass, the water and the sky.
Sit there, lifeless waiting until she drops by.

In this bland little world where she'll do as she pleases.
She sits in the street, thinking up patters to paint trees with.

Swirling colors move without help from her hand.
As she sits, creating her own little land.

In her own little world, in her twisted little mind.
Where she does as she pleases and spends most of her time.

She sits in a tree looking out on her world.
Until her mother calls to her, wanting a word.

All the colors around her swirl and fall away.
But she feels no sadness as her world turns grey.

For she knows in her heart and she knows in her mind.
That she'll be here tomorrow, at just about the same time.
:iconfuel-the-fire:

Author's Comments

I really know nothing about poetry, I just write down things that pop into my head. So, once again, let me know if it's in the wrong section. I'll fix it.

Alright, there is a drawing to go along with this one, I'll put it up on my other account, where I put my traditional work.
Here --> [link]
I might even put it on this account, since it goes with this poem.

:peace: and :heart:
~Dani~

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmosdef-larcenciel:
b'aww, i love it! :heart:

--
you just lost the game.

--
what? who says sarcasm doesn't work on the internet?
:iconfuel-the-fire:
haha thanks aidaN!! :hug:

I based the outfit in the drawing off...can you guess? lmao but I gave her dreads. :XD: I love dreadlocks! They're so awesome! lol

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: I'm not broken. Don't try and fix me. :bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletred:

[link]
:iconmosdef-larcenciel:
haha, nicee! :love:

:glomp:

--
you just lost the game.

--
what? who says sarcasm doesn't work on the internet?
:iconfuel-the-fire:
lmao

RAWR!!:glomp:

Thanks for the fave btw!! I:heart:yoooz!!! :XD:

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: I'm not broken. Don't try and fix me. :bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletred:

[link]
:iconmosdef-larcenciel:
ACK -falls over-

:iconsuperglompplz:

i love yooz tambien ~ :heart:
XD

--
you just lost the game.

--
what? who says sarcasm doesn't work on the internet?
:iconfuel-the-fire:
Yayz!! -helps you up-

.........................


....................


................


............


........


....

...:poke:

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: I'm not broken. Don't try and fix me. :bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletred:

[link]
:iconmosdef-larcenciel:
bhahah,
:iconpokeplz:

--
you just lost the game.

--
what? who says sarcasm doesn't work on the internet?
:iconfuel-the-fire:
lmao

Where are you getting these awesome smilies I've never seen? lol

--
:bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: I'm not broken. Don't try and fix me. :bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletred:

[link]
:iconmosdef-larcenciel:
teehee x]

--
you just lost the game.

--
what? who says sarcasm doesn't work on the internet?

Details

September 12
1.7 KB

Statistics

24
2 [who?]
19 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Site Map